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2018 First Place Winner: Karin DeLaurentis

Congratulations to First Place Winner, Karin DeLaurentis...

They packed their bags, said goodbye to their family, and boarded a bus to Los Angeles.

They wanted an adventure. I imagine them making plans over dishes, canning or wash day. Just a half-humorous suggestion at first, then more serious with each conversation, they talk it over, growing more excited, more excited. Slowly realizing: we can do this. Over the protests of friends and family. Saving their meager salaries, counting each nickel 'til they had enough money.

In the land of movie stars and palm trees, Cora and Elsie lived a life they could only imagine back in Ohio. It was the free-wheeling 1920s, the era of flappers and bootleg. Instead of school marms, they found work as pert and well-dressed shopgirls at the May Co., a large department store. They picnicked at the beach in risque bathing costumes with their dapper-looking boyfriends. They tooled around on Sunday afternoons in a sleek coupe. In their frequent letters home, they described visits to Sunset Boulevard and the Hollywood Bowl, the La Brea Tarpits and Grauman's Chinese Theater. They spied stars and starlets (right on the streets!), and attended the 1925 premier of Ben Hur. In old photos, they look sweet -- Elsie taller and quietly pretty, Cora the beauty, very petite with coal black hair and a Clara Bow smile.

The ladies never married. They lived together in their sunny bungalow apartment until Elsie died in the 1970s. Cora was ill by then, and at last, came home. She lived with my grandma, her sister- in-law, for a short time, and I was lucky enough to know her a little before her death. She still dyed her hair coal black and beneath the wrinkles she still had her Clara Bow twinkle. I wonder if she and Elsie ever thought about all those clever gifts they sent us? I wonder if they understood, beyond our conventional thank you notes, how thrilling it was for a little country girl to get a shiny blue and gold box from the May Co. in Los Angeles, California?

I am guessing they did. I am guessing that young Cora and Elsie, as they dreamed of California in their farmhouse beds at night, might also have dreamed of owning a charm bracelet decorated with little red rubies and pearls.

—Karin DeLaurentis
First Place, 2018 Write a DearReader Contest